High diving giraffes

 I walk with my long legs into a infinite stretch of white shiny tiles. I stopped at a 

camera and start staring at it. I swing my long tail with brown hair at the end.

SPS

 I’m feeling excited  to walk with my friends. Sione is in front of me, walking with a long step. His tail is wiggling back and forwards. Jacob is behind me. I can hear him clip clopping. We all continued to walk in a line like soldiers.

A big loop was close by. It takes hours to get to the top.

At the top, a diving board is nearby and my friend Spelman is hanging upside down. I realize that we are about to jump into a giant swimming pool with dark blue lanes. It  is my turn. I quickly run fast and grab my friend’s chin and jump.

I start to fall quickly, I relax my body and it feels like I am falling from the sky.

 

I dive into the water and swim quickly up to the surface. I walk to the top again. At the top there is a second diving board and this time it was my friend Eli hanging ready to grab us. It is my turn again.  I dive into the water like a big blue dolphin. It is fun. We all swim to the surface and quickly walk to the side of the pool to drink the chlorinated water. 

PETER’S JOURNEY.

War has began. As bombs exploded in each houses some people did not survive.  As I went outside and walked to see my dad I saw houses and vehicles damaged by bombs, grenades and rocket launchers. My dad came up to me and told me, “Peter you must take your brothers far far away from our home. Make sure they are safe.” “Why dad?” I asked.  “I promised you that I will never leave. I’m sorry but this is the time that you will have to leave. Just promise that you will keep our treasure safe.  Just pack your things and go”, he said. “OK Dad I guess I have to tell my brothers. As I walked back to our house it was destroyed. But luckily my brothers survived. I quickly said “guys are you alright?” “Yes Peter we are, what happend to our house” they said? “A bomb came and struck down our house,” I told them.  “Dad is he ok, hes fine  but dad told me we have to walk far far away from our home, but we are not going until dad is coming with us.”

 

PETER’S PERSPECTIVE

As I walk with my dad, I look back and see houses destroyed by bombs. I hear glass shattering and people shouting out for help. A bleeding mother holding her baby. Black smoke surrounding the sky like clouds. As the war began I was scared. I see tanks damaging vehicles,fire burning from houses and gunshots. I also see helicopters blasting rocket launchers from the sky.

MY TREASURE

KABOOM!!!!! A bomb has aimed for my house I quickly run and take my mothers cross to protect me. My mother gave this cross years before she died. It is a very special cross. When she gave me that cross she told me that she is always there to protect me. 

 

I quickly get out of the house with my dad and run to my aunt’s house. As I run, my dad takes his old shovel with him. I am very confused. My aunt’s house is miles away, instead my dad goes in a different direction. I am still confused about where he is going and why he took his old shovel. I follow him. He stops at an old house. He goes up to an old lonely tree where there is a  X. He takes his old shovel and digs up an old treasure. This old house was my mother’s house…

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